Friday, October 14, 2005

Evolution

Friends can be fiends

Partners turn parasites

The public, the pubic

The near are the far.

Looked through, like a window

I once was a widow

Trapped in my head

Mistaken for dead.

But there’s life in these veins

And beds to be slept in

Gains to be made

Debts to be paid.

Now sweet is the silence

Precious as diamonds

When the soul’s been laid bare

It’s safer to care.

6 comments:

fuquinay said...

I like the word play here. I especially see friends as fiends these days. I feel you wrote that part for me. :)

I've been writing a lot of poetry this year. A good thing, always, even if the inspiration is sad. Poetry heals the soul.

Brownie said...

Very witty. I like this one. "When the soul's been laid bare, it's safer to care" really jumped out at me. Nice to see you writing again!

Prom said...

This is good news right?

Dawn Rossbach said...

That's what I was wondering too Prom. I too like the "When the soul's been laid bare,..."

Good to see you writing again!

(my word verification - peniqupu - for some reason it made me think of penguin poop - go figure)

Jane said...

Yes, this is good news. Thank you, friends.
Art - maybe that verification only pops up for us Canadians...makes us feel at home, all that penguin poop and those moose droppings, you know!~

: )

Dawn Rossbach said...

I keep checking to see if you are writing anything new. Do you have anything brewing?

Very funny about the moose droppings.